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Pear-White Clouds, Spring Thoughts
Shang Yin (Shang mode, standard tuning):2 1 2 4 5 6 1 2
梨雲春思 1
Li Yun Chun Si  
  First page of the original tablature (.pdf of entire piece) 3    
Li Yun Chun Si is a setting for qin of ten ci poems. The overall title suggests a romantic theme: both "pear clouds" (i.e., "pear-white clouds") and "spring thoughts" are terms often used within the context of romance. In addition, most of the individual section titles (i.e., ci titles) have similarly romantic implications, and this is usually also reflected in the actual lyrics.4

As can be seen at right, the musical setting is attributed to Yangzhou's Zhuang Zhenfeng,5 style name Die'an (ca. 1624 - after 1667) and the lyrics are attributed to Hangzhou's Mao Xianshu, style name Zhihuang (1620 - 1688).6 It is not clear to what extent the setting of these ten poems was intended as a unit, as opposed to simply a set of 10 independent settings.7 In any case, they were published with little change in at least four later handbooks through 1884.8

At the same time, though, Li Yun Chun Si has an interesting relationship to the piece called Grass Hall Intonation (草堂吟 Caotang Yin),9 published in Japan in four sections. Specifically, the titles and lyrics of the four sections of Caotang Yin are the same as for the first four sections of Li Yun Chun Si, but the music is almost completely different. The relationship is probably due to the fact that the compiler of the Japanese handbook, Jiang Xingchou (1639 - 1695), had lived in Hangzhou at the same time as Mao and Zhuang, going to Japan in 1676. Why the lyrics are the same but the melodies different is not at all clear.10

According to Zhuang Zhenfeng's own afterword to Li Yun Chun Si he created this piece (by either revising melodies or creating new ones, it is not clear which) to replace what he considered to be quite unsatisfactory settings; since the time frame suggests that the Japanese setting was published later, presumably that was not the referenced unsatisfactory setting (further comment). On the face of it, this seems to emphasize that although the tradition of ci poetry was supposedly intended to allow multiple sets of lyrics to apply to a single melody, within the surviving guqin repertoire the practice seems quite the opposite: more likely the lyrics will remain but a new melody will be applied to it. However, properly evalutating this observation requires searching for evidence that qin players did sometimes substitute lyrics for a specific melody.11

In any case, because all this seems to attest to a widespread custom at the time of making new settings for either existing lyrics or lyrical patterns, the only way to try to recapture the melodic style of qin songs from that time will thus be to try to become familiar with the style by reconstructing as many of these melodies as one can.12

In this, it will be useful also to search for differences in the ways Zhuang Zhenfeng created (or re-arranged) music for quite a variety of lyrics or texts. These include, as well as the present ci settings, a Buddhist chant (Shitan Zhang), four Tang quatrains (Zao Zhao Yin), and prose commentary (Linhe Xiuxi).

 
Introduction13
Li Yun Chun Si has a rather lengthy preface written in 康熙乙巳 1665 by 王士祿 Wang Shilu.14 It goes as follows (the original, in grass writing, is here as a .pdf).15

予性懶,不耐習諸雜藝,以故於琴善所解即所謂勾、踢、卓、注、向、背、吟、猱,俗師之所擅,以教授者亦不甚了(了*),願意頗好轉。每讀宋畫處士戴顒傳,顒鼓琴,並新聲變曲,其三調《遊絃》、《廣陵》、《止息》之流皆與世異轍,心慕之意。置此處士於青林碧磵之間,停之捶(操?)琴,詠矚必殊凡,理持此與世異,故世所名善琴家友,鮮是當予意者。以在湖上遇蝶菴,為予言琴,語皆出人意表。嘗一夕偕諸同人汎舟西陵,泊第一橋下。疎星乍出,嵩(?)氣四吹,蝶菴布幾,風水之交,為鼓一再行。於時青天如幕,僕鄰皆靜,為誦常尉「泠泠七絃遍,萬木澄幽陰」之句,覺瓠巴成連去人未遠已。又出太平奏以下十二曲桐示,則並蝶菴參合古法。自出新意為之者。世逸情遠韻,真欲抗手戴公。而予於中尤絕愛《梨雲春思》之名。唐人詩云「夢中喚作梨花雲」,故「梨雲」以言夢也。夫夢之境幽而深奇,變而飄渺,皆與琴德有合。況緯以靈思,創為雅畼,安絃命指,又豈俗師世曲之可擬乎。此曲蝶菴又名以《草堂闋》,蓋雜取草堂諸調合成之。因蝶菴索序此曲,而樂為識之如此。
康熙乙巳歲季夏中灨新城王士
祿子(虚/居/底?)漫題於西湖舟次。

    *(: why is there a mark here meaning "repeat [this character]"?)

Translation:
"By nature I am lazy, without patience to study all the arts, so as for qin I am capable only of understanding (such basic stroke techniques as) 'hook', 'kick', 'slide up into', 'slide down into', 'towards', 'reverse', 'fast vibrato', 'slow vibrato' - things that ordinary masters are good at and tried to teach but that I did not (learn) very thoroughly. Whenever I read the biography of the (Liu) Song dynasty's
Dai Yong I noticed he not only played qin but also that his "New Sounds from Modified Melodies" had three melodies, You Xian, Guangling and Zhi Xi, that were quite new and distinctive, and I admired this. So then put such a recluse amongst green groves and jade torrents stopping to strum (play) a qin: his chanting out of this world, his method so unique, to such an extent that those who are called qin masters by most afficionados are in my opinion rarely up to this standard!

After I met Die'an on the lake he spoke to me about qin, his words all exceeding my expectations. One night, I accompanied friends on a boating trip to Xiling,16 and moored under the first bridge. As the sparse stars suddenly emerged, with the [..] breeze blowing all around, Die'an set up his small table then, joining with the wind and water, played a melody then played again. At the time, the blue sky was like a canopy, the servants and neighbors were silent, and I recited (Chang Jian's) "As lucid notes sound on all seven strings, / Myriad trees purify their mysterious shade." I felt that Hu Ba and Cheng Lian were not far off. He then took out (tablature for) twelve melodies beginning with Taiping Zou and showed it to me. These are all the tunes that Die'an made based on his original ideas but in accord with ancient methods. In unfettered sentiments and far-reaching resonance, the tunes can truly match those of (the above-mentioned) Master Dai. Among these, I especially loved the one called "Li Yun Chun Si". A Tang poem goes, "In a dream I took pear blossoms for clouds." Thus, "pear-cloud" is an expression for dreaming. The dream world is mysterious, deep, and marvelous; it is changeful and elusive - all these qualities are in accordance with the virtues of qin. He has further arranged them with his spiritual thoughts and created elegant melodies for them. When he directed his fingers across the strings, how could any worldly tune by a common qin-performer match him? This piece Die'an also calls "Cottage Stanzas," for he took various tunes/stanzas from a/the cottage (?) and combined them (with new melodies?). And now, since Die'an has asked me to write a preface to this piece, I have happily written the above.

The closing then says that, "in the summer of 1665 (1664?) Wang Shilu wrote this while on a boat in West Lake".

Unfortunately this preface does not clarify the precise nature of the Caotang Que. Did they have music attached, and if so how? Zhuang's afterword, below, suggests they were lyrics the musical setting of which he did not like, but did he then write new melodies, or was his work more a matter of modifying the melodies? Did these have any connection to the Caotang Yin published later in Japan?

Afterword to Li Yun Chun Si

This afterword is as follows:

偶坐友人齋,得見此譜,援琴試之,宮商乖背,指法參差,想非知音所製。予獨愛其詞,遂依韻另諧新聲。內有喉音字,須借黃鍾,以補中聲。因曲意綿延,彈之不忍釋手,聽之不能去懷。易名《梨雲春思》。
Once when I happened to be sitting in a friend's studio I saw written music for this, and so took up a qin and tried to play it. The melody was discordant, the fingering (awkward?), not like what a musical person would create. (But) I liked the ci lyrics, so I straightaway matched them with new sounds. These included gutturals (?), and so this had to be put into huangzhong (mode?), in order to balance out the moderate sounds (?) ....and I changed the name to "Pear-White Clouds, Spring Thoughts".

Translations incomplete.

 
Music and lyrics 17 (timings below follow my tentative recording 聽錄音 18)
The 10+1 sections of Li Yun Chun Si are all in shang mode (details). For each section the music is paired to a separate ci patten following the traditional syllabic pairing method. The lyrics themselves are as follows (compare Caotang Yin and see www.qinzhijie.com; the translation [still in process] is largely the work of 章琛 Zhang Chen19):

  1. 00.00
    鵲橋仙 Que Qiao Xian (Magpie Bridge Immortals)
    The ci setting of this name
    in Japan has the same lyrics but different music. There are also earlier settings, the most famous one perhaps being this one by 秦觀 Qin Guan. Qingping Yue also concerns Magpie Bridge, but the form is unrelated.

    輕煖破寒,擔雲閣雨,庭院深深鶯語。
    Qīng nuǎn pò hán, dān yún gé yǔ, tíng yuàn shēn shēn yīng yǔ.
    Wisps of warmth break the cold, lagging clouds delay the rain,
          Deep, deep in the courtyard orioles sing.
    夭桃枝半出墻頭,見無數蜂狂蜨舞。
    Yāo táo zhī bàn chū qiáng tóu, jiàn wú shù fēng kuáng dié wǔ.
    Blooming boughs of peach blossoms half-reach over the wall,
          Beholding countless bees and butterflies dancing wildly.
    柳外繡鞍,花前羅襪,陌上喧天簫鼓。
    Liǔ wài xiù ān, huā qián luó wà, mò shàng xuān tiān xiāo gǔ.
    Beyond the willows: horses with embroidered saddles, beneath the flowers: gauze stockings,
          On the roads, the din of flutes and drums.
    春風有意惱人腸,問何處:江皋湘浦?
    Chūn fēng yǒu yì nǎo rén cháng, wèn hé chù jiāng gāo xiāng pǔ.
    Spring winds purposefully vex the heart;
          I ask where [my beloved] is - on the Yangtze shores or Xiang River banks?

  2. 01.00
    點絳唇 Dian Jiang Chun (A Touch of Red Lips)
    Li Qingzhao wrote several ci poems in this form. And Japanese handbooks have at least two examples, a Dian Jiang Chun, and a Nan Pu Yue.

    細雨斜風,十二高樓煙幾寸?
    Xì yǔ xié fēng, shí'èr gāo lóu yān jǐ cùn.
    Fine rain, a slanting breeze,
          the
    twelve high towers [blocked by] how many inches of mist?
    誰相廝認,傳與靑鸞信。
    Sheí xiāng sī rèn, chuán yǔ qīng luán xìn.
    With whom to make acquaintance
          And deliver a
    missive by blue simurgh?
    倦倚珠簾,長抱新春恨,
    Juàn yǐ zhū lián, zhǎng bào xīn chūn hèn.
    [She] stands languidly by the pearl curtain,
          Always harboring regrets about spring.
          悶悶悶。
          mèn mèn mèn.
          Depression. Depression. Depression.
    亂紅成陣,又是淸明近。
    Luàn hóng chéng zhèn, yòu shì Qīng Míng jìn.
    Disorderly red petals form a shower
          Again the Clear Luminous Festival approaches.

  3. 01.44
    好事近 Hao Shi Jin (Approaching Bliss)
    Compare
    in Japan as well as a ci of this name by Fan Chengda, one by Li Qingzhao, and many by other women poets.

    獨自步苔堦,驚訊海棠開遍。
    Dú zì bù tái jiē, jīng xùn hǎi táng kāi biàn.
    I walk in solitude on the mossy steps,
          Surprised to find the begonias in full bloom.
    怪得東皇有意,也到深深院。
    Guài dé dōng huáng yǒu yì, yě dào shēn shēn yuàn.
    I marvel that the God of the East (i.e. of Spring) has the intent
          To also visit my deep, deep abode.
    惜花常是爲花愁,羞妬春風面。
    Xī huā cháng shì wèi huā chóu, xiū dù chūn fēng miàn.
    I cherish the flowers, always worried for them,
          Humbled and jealous of the face of spring wind.
    閉門不管韶華,付與鶯和燕。
    Bì mén bù guǎn sháo huá, fù yǔ yīng hé yàn.
    Shut the door and stop caring about the season’s splendor –
          Give it up to the orioles and the swallows.

  4. 02.27
    畫堂春 Hua Tang Chun (A Painted Hall in Spring)
    Ci in this pattern
    by Qin Guan are given here (translated on another site) and here. Such publications, with no musical setting, do not indicate a repeat of the last phrase, as here. As for the two other available melodic settings, the one in Japan has the same lyrics and also repeats the last phrase and then adds one more line with new lyrics, but the song of this name from 1687 does not repeat the last phrase or indicate any repetition in the melody.

    借問東風來幾時,金堂燕子雙飛。
    Jiè wèn dōng fēng lái jǐ shí, jīn táng yàn zǐ shuāng fēi.
    浮花浪蘂弄春暉,蜂蝶霏霏。
    Fú huā làng ruǐ nòng chūn huī, fēng dié fēi fēi.
    門巷輪蹄雜沓,園林紅紫芳菲。
    Mén xiàng lún tí zá dá, yuán lín hóng zǐ fāng fēi.
    海棠自惜是花妃,着意徘徊,着意徘徊。   (The repeated last phrase has a different melody.)
    Hǎi táng zì xī shì huā fēi, zhuó yì pái huái, zhuó yì pái huái.

  5. 03.20
    少年遊 Shao Nian You (Youthful Travel; in harmonics)
    The most famous example of
    this cipai seems to be this one by Liu Yong.

    昨夜東風入畫屛,欹枕不勝情。
    Zuó yè dōng fēng rù huà píng, yī zhěn bù shèng qíng.
    吹簫秦史,登樓楚客,囘首也無憑。
    Chuī xiāo qín shǐ, dēng lóu chǔ kè, huí shǒu yě wú píng.
    曉來數點催詩雨,百舌兩三聲。
    Xiǎo lái shù diǎn cuī shī yǔ, bǎi shé liǎng sān shēng.
    滿鏡新愁,一場幽悶,都付與芳樽。
    Mǎn jìng xīn chóu, yī chǎng yōu mèn, dōu fù yǔ fāng zūn.

  6. 04.09
    風中柳 Feng Zhong Liu (Wind Amidst Willows)
    44734.xxx; XII/592xxx. However, there do seem to be earlier songs called Feng Zhong Liu with phrasing similar to here. The lyrics for the present melody are as follows (arranged to emphasize the relationship):

    歎    萬種愁生,三分春半,    看吹綿    滲雨交戰。
    記得柳困花羞,鷪慵蝶倦,    滿園韶麗    何曾見。
    朱顏暗改,屈指流光如箭,    幾囘憶舊    空成怨。
    黃昏近,這般愁,何處消遣;強立向,梨花庭院。

    Tàn wàn zhǒng chóu shēng, sān fēn chūn bàn, kàn chuī mián shèn yǔ jiāo zhàn.
    Jì dé liǔ kùn huā xiū, yīng yōng dié juàn, mǎn yuán sháo lì hé céng jiàn.
    Zhū yán àn gǎi, qū zhǐ liú guāng rú jiàn, jǐ huí yì jiù kōng chéng yuàn.
    Huáng hūn jìn, zhè bān chóu, hé chù xiāo qiǎn; qiáng lì xiàng, lí huā tíng yuàn.

    The online examples of poems in a pattern called Feng Zhong Liu all differ from this. Perhaps the most significant example is the following, attributed to a 孫夫人 Lady Sun (not the wife of Liu Bei but a lady of the Song dynasty also named 鄭文妻 Zheng Wenqi [or wife of Zheng Wen]; she is also associated with "草堂詞 Caotang Ci"). Her lyrics here are:

    風中柳(閨情)
    鎖減芳容,端的爲郎煩惱。鬢慵梳、宮妝草草。
    別離情緒,等歸來都告。    怕傷郎、又還休道。
    利鎖名繮,幾阻當年歡笑。更那堪、鱗鴻信杳。
    蟾枝高折,願從今須早。    莫辜負、鳳幃人老。

    Lady Sun's pattern is 66 字 divided as 33 x 2:
          (4,6. 3,4. 4,5. 3,4.) x 2 .
    In contrast, the pattern with the 1664 song setting is 67 字 divided 33 + 34:
          5,4,  7 (3+4?).   6,4,     7 (4+3?)
          4,6,  7 (4+3?).  3,3,4.   3,4.  

    Clearly there is a relationship, but the differences are significant, the major ones being the arrangement and number of characters in the first half of each line, plus the fact that the last 7 characters of each line in 1664 do not always seem naturally to divide as 3+4. The significance of this is puzzling.

    Other possibly related cipai titles are 風中柳令 Feng Zhong Liu Ling (44734.xxx) and 謝池春 Xie Chi Chun, but none of these seems to fit the present pattern either.

  7. 05.04
    謁金門 Ye Jin Men (Visiting Golden Gate; in harmonics)
    36573.7 Cipai name;
    Wei Zhuang wrote one in this form

    東方曉,花底數聲啼鳥。
    Dōng fāng xiǎo, huā dǐ shù shēng tí niǎo.
    渚宮雙闕晴雲杳,瓊樓人起早。
    Zhǔ gōng shuāng què qíng yún yǎo, qióng lóu rén qǐ zǎo.
    羅衣尙覺寒峭,意沉沉,看花老。
    Luó yī shàng jué hán qiào, yì chén chén, kàn huā lǎo.
    試問江南春去了,何處尋芳草?
    Shì wèn Jiāng nán chūn qù liao, hé chù xún fāng cǎo?

  8. 05.51
    醉花陰 Zui Hua Yin (Drunk in the Blossom's Shade; "slow down")
    The
    poem in this form by Li Qingzhao is 7+5 for the first line.

    攪牕花影鶯聲碎,春風惱人如醉。                 (not 7,5: one extra character)
    Jiǎo chuāng huā yǐng yīng shēng suì, chūn fēng nǎo rén rú zuì
    無睡倚欄桿,深閨晝閑,燕泥空欲墜。
    Wú shuì yǐ lán gǎn, shēn guī zhòu xián, yàn ní kōng yù zhuì.
    楊花無力因風起,閒逐游絲細。                     (in 1664 起 was written 走尺)
    Yáng huā wú lì yīn fēng qǐ, xián zhú yóu sī xì.
    此際暮煙平,立盡斜陽,朱戶重重閉。
    Cǐ jì mù yān píng, lì jǐn xié yáng, zhū hù chóng chóng bì.

  9. 06.41
    一剪梅 Yi Jian Mei (A Sprig of Plum Blossoms)
    Li Qingzhao also wrote one in this form

    聞道春來春又歸,紅滿花枝,綠滿花枝。
    Wén dào chūn lái chūn yòu guī, hóng mǎn huā zhī, lǜ mǎn huā zhī.
    乍晴乍雨踏靑時,晴也愁睂,雨也愁睂。
    Zhà qíng zhà yǔ tà qīng shí, qíng yě chóu méi, yǔ yě chóu méi.
    藍橋有路阻佳期,心在天涯,夢在天涯。
    Lán qiáo yǒu lù zǔ jiā qí, xīn zài tiān yá, mèng zài tiān yá.
    淚零花片濕春衣,怕聽鵑啼,莫聽鵑啼。
    Lèi líng huā piàn shī chūn yī, pà tīng juān tí, mò tīng juān tí.

  10. 07.37
    千秋歲 Qian Qiu Sui (A Thousand Autumns)
    Compare the lyrics of Section 10 plus the coda to those of the separate halves of
    this poem by 張先 Zhang Xian and this one by 黃庭堅 Huang Tingjian

    斜陽巷陌,杜宇聲聲切。
    Xié yáng xiàng mò, dù yǔ shēng shēng qiè.
    柳絮風,梨花雪。                        (Huang Tingjian same; Zhang Xian has 7 characters)
    Liǔ xù fēng, lí huā xuě.
    只道春爲主,誰知春爲客。
    Zhǐ dào chūn wèi zhǔ, sheí zhī chūn wèi kè.
    望不見,雲山疊處千層碧。
    Wàng bù jiàn, yún shān dié chù qiān céng bì.

    08.10
    尾聲 Weisheng (Coda, in harmonics)
    This could simply be a near-repeat of Section 10 but the overall pattern makes it seems more likely that the two together were intended to make a complete Qian Qiu Shui.

    慵把彩毫攜,莫把金樽歇。         (Others also begin part 2 with 5+5 3+3 5+5)
    Yōng bǎ cǎi háo xié, mò bǎ jīn zūn xiē.
    悶懨懨,愁脈脈。
    Mèn yān yān, chóu mài mài.
    有淚濕靑衫,無句題紅葉。
    Yǒu lèi shī qīng shān, wú jù tí hóng yè.
    知心  惟有夜半穿窓月。               (知心也? 知心著? All the old ci patterns seem to have 3+7 here.)
    Zhī xīn wéi yǒu yè bàn chuān chuāng yuè.
    08.56 (曲終 end)

None of the poems from Qinxue Xinsheng is yet translated.

 
Footnotes (Shorthand/I references are explained on a
separate page)

1. Pear-White Clouds, Spring Thoughts (梨雲春思 Li Yun Chun Si) (XII/78)
Attributions for the present song setting are given at the beginning of the melody (see image above, discussed further below).

15403.23 has only 梨雲: "clouds that are white like pears"; quotes suggest a connection to spring and romance. "Chun Si", the name of an unrelated melody, is also a term suggestive of romance.

There seems to be an unrelated melody in the pipa repertoire called Li Yun Chun Si. The only explanation I have seen suggests that the original name is Chun Si and that perhaps Li Yun was a woman's name.

(Another apparently unrelated reference mentioning 梨雲 Li Yun is 杏雨梨雲 14820.xxx.)
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2. Shang mode (商音 Shang Yin)
There is further discussion of the modal characteristics of qin melodies during the Ming dynasty under Modality in early Ming qin tablature, with further specifics on shang mode melodies under Shenpin Shang Yi. During the Qing dynasty perceptions of mode apparently changed, as can be seen by the changing mode names in later occurrences of this piece.

Here, as with some other late Ming dynasty melodies, the note fa appears on a number of occasions (clearly heard on the present recording). Otherwise, \as with other Ming dynasty melodies in shang mode, throughout the whole piece the open first string is treated as do (1; transcribed as "C"), which is also the main tonal center (all sections also end on do). As with these other melodies the secondary tonal centers are sol (5) and re (2; shang), but shang seems somewhat less prominent and there are no flatted 3s.
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3. Image: Opening page of Li Yun Chun Si
Copied from QQJC XII/78. Just under the title "Li Yun Chun Si" it says, "商音十段 shang mode, 10 sections". The next two lines to the left of that say,

三山莊臻鳳蝶庵子諧音
錢塘毛先舒稚黃氏校詞

The first line says, "The sounds were harmonized by Maestro Zhuang Zhenfeng, (style name) Die'an, of Sanshan (Yangzhou)"; the second says, "The ci lyrics were adapted by Master Mao Xianshu, (style name) Zhihuang of Qiantang (Hangzhou)". An afterword gives more details, suggesting Zhuang perhaps originally heard the melodies from a friend and arranged them for qin.

On the fourth line from the right it says, "Section 1, Magpie Bridge Immortals". Then after this the lines alternate between the song lyrics and the paired qin tablature.
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4. Romantic themes
Rules such as those laid out here suggest the qin should only be used for moral self-cultivation or high-minded bonding with others having similar airms. However, as can be seen from this program, there not only have been many qin songs with romantic themes, their use for seduction (albeit elegant and high-minded, not vulgar and licentious) is a significant motif in popular media.

Still, I personally am wondering how some of these songs might have sounded if sung by one of the Eight Sirens of Nangjing (金陵八艷 Jinling Ba Yan aka 秦淮八豔 Qinhuai Ba Yan).
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5. 莊臻鳳諧音 Musical setting by Zhuang Zhenfeng
All the commentary I have seen seems to assume that Zhuang Zhenfeng (ca. 1624 - after 1667) "created" or "composed" the music, but the Chinese term "諧音 xie yin" could mean simply that he arranged a pre-existing melody. In the afterword Zhuang himself says he rejected an earlier melody and "諧新聲 arranged new sounds". This, plus the fact that he apparently created other melodies in the book, suggest the melody really was his own, though even this is not completely conclusive. See, for example, Section 2 of Caotang Yin: the three other sections of this piece (which has the same lyrics) seem to have a completely different melody but that of Section 2 is clearly related (further comment).
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6. Mao Xianshu (1620—1688; baike.com/wiki)
錢塘毛先舒(字)稚黃 From Hangzhou, style name Zhihuang, he was one of the 西陵十子 Ten (poetry) masters of Xiling who flourished in Hangzhou at the beginning of the Qing dynasty. (西陵 is the same as 西泠; the ten were 陸圻、柴紹炳、沈謙、陳廷會、毛先舒、孫治、張綱孫、丁澎、虞黃昊、吳百朋). Zhuang's biographical entry refers to a comment Mao made about Zhuang. As for Mao's work on the present text, at the front of the piece it says he "較詞 jiao ci", literally, "revised the lyrics". Although this may mean he merely adapted very similar lyrics, it seems more likely that "revised" means he created new lyrics to replace earlier ci lyrics in the same pattern.
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7. A suite or 10 separate melodies?
All melodies are in the same mode, and some musical phrases are repeated (for example, the melody of the last line of Section 4 is almost the same as that of the first line of Section 5). However, based on my preliminary transcription, there is not a sufficient number of such musical phrases and motifs to prove that the collection of songs was intended as a unified whole.
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8. Tracing Li Yun Chun Si
Zha Guide 33/255/491 lists Li Yun Chun Si in five handbooks, omitting the 草堂吟 Caotang Yin published in Japan. In some places the 1664 edition is not very clearly printed. However, the four 19th century publications are seem to be based on the original 1664 tablature, rather than someone else's playing/interpretation of the melody, and these are clear enough that in almost every case they can be used to determine what was intended by the original.

The five handbooks are:

  1. Qinxue Xinsheng (1664; XII/78; .pdf)
    "商音 Shang yin". Zha Guide, based on the original preface (原註), says 又名草堂闋 also called Caotang Que
  2. Yiluxuan Qinpu (ca. 1802; XIX/230; .pdf)
    "商音 shang yin; from 1676"; same section titles and melody, but no lyrics; no commentary
  3. Erxiang Qinpu (1833; XXIII/151; this handbook also has Wuye Wu Qiufeng; see also Zhang Ziqian)
    "宮音 Gong yin" and some pu clarified by using decimals, but melody, section titles and lyrics seem same; adds a lengthy Afterword
  4. Tianwenge Qinpu (1876; XXV/369)
    "徴音 Zhi yin", but section titles, melody and lyrics seem to be same; no commentary except that source is given as 梅華庵 1833
  5. Shuangqin Shuwu Qinpu Jicheng (1884; XXVII/345; .pdf)
    "黃鍾均,商音 Huangzhong jun, shang yin". Same section titles, melody and lyrics but called simply "梨雲 Li Yun" and has a brief further comment.

Regarding 草堂吟 Caotang Yin, the words Caotang Que (草堂闋 31629.173xxx; Grass Hall Stanzas) are mentioned in the preface to the Li Yun Chun Si in Qinxue Xinsheng (see XII/77, first line on bottom). It is presumably for this reason that Zha Guide p.33 says Qinxue Xinsheng listed Caotang Que as an alternate title. However, it is not clear why the setting published in Japan of the lyrics of the first four sections here, which have mostly different music, is called Caotang Yin.

From modern times there is also available a transcription by 張子謙 Zhang Ziqian of at least half of the virtually identical Li Yun Chun Si from 1833. Zhang's original seems to have been an unpublished manuscript, but it can be found online on several websites such as here. The transcription is into jianzipu (number notation) and it includes the original tablature and lyrics. A few short phrases without tablature or lyrics were added at the beginning of each section. In addition, the manuscript/online version, which seems to be the only one available, is incomplete, consisting only of sections 1, 2, 7, 8, 10 and the coda (pp.43-46), then commentary (pp.68-69). I do not know of any recordings.
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9. Grass Hall Intonation (草堂吟 Caotang Yin
See next footnote.
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10. Comparing Caotang Yin and Li Yun Chun Si (pdf of first sections)
Although the lyrics of the four sections of Caotang Yin are the same as those of the first four of the ten sections in Li Yun Chun Si the music seems to be almost completely different except for in Section 2 (點絳唇 Dian Jiang Chun in both), where for the first two thirds they seem almost the same but then in the last third become almost completely different again. The significance of these similarities and differences is not clear.

The melodies for the first section of each version are combined into a comparative transcription in this pdf, which has the 1664 Li Yun Chun Si on the upper line and the 1676 Caotang Yin underneath it. Based my own examination of this section although the music is different, as are the musical contours, both can largely be sung to the same rhythm. I haven't examined any of the sections in Caotang Yin closely enough to know how their differences might be significant (e.g., to the mode). By the time Jiang Xingchou went to Japan (1676) Qinxue Xinsheng had already been published. This suggests that Jiang's version was not the one rejected by Zhuang Zhenfeng. From my observation Section 1 of Caotang Yin is quite playable. Perhaps a careful reconstruction of the two could shed further light on the significance of the differences.
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11. Substituting lyrics
A systematic search for such a practice is beyond my current capabilities. At present the closest evidence for this is given with the 1573 melody Shi Yin, structured (7+7) x 4; see in particular this footnote. It may or may not be signficant that Zhuang Zhenfeng used different melodies for each of his settings of the quatrains in Zao Zhao Yin.
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12. Recovering the song tradition
Another important aspect is vocal technique/style, regarding which see further.
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13. Introduction
In addition to the preface and afterword here, there are some interesting additional comments (or changes) in these other handbooks:

None of these says anything about whether Li Yun Chun Si should be considered an integrated piece or a suite of separate ci lyric settings: a sort of song cycle.
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14. Wang Shilu 王士祿 (1626-1673)
21297.64 王士祿字子底,山東新城人. He was a poet, as were his brothers 王士祜 and 王士禎 (q.v.): together they were known as the "三王 Three Wangs".
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15. Original preface
Reading this is complicated by a number of characters which seem either incorrect or highly idiosyncractic. Thanks to 孫小青 Sun Xiaoqing, 姚瑩 Yao Ying, 劉成漢 Lau Shing-Hon and 章琛 Zhang Chen for their help in deciphering it.
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16. Xiling: 西陵
Here 西陵 is the same as 西泠: an old name for Hangzhou (see comment above about the 10 Poets of Xiling).
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17. Music and Lyrics
Many of the handbook's finger technique explanations (XII/50-3) are ones I haven't seen actually used before. Some of these included here in Li Yun Chun Si are:

There is further comment on finger technique explanations here. In general, such finger techique explanations are often imprecise; often they also seem just to copy ones from earlier handbooks, without regard for whether they are used in the accompanying handbook or not (i.e., their usage might have changed). I haven't gone through this handbook carefully enough to know whether this is the case here.
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18. Tentative recording
The recording is tentative because the lyrics are not yet translated. It is also likely that a singer would make considerable changes in the rhythms. It should be noted, however, that Zhuang Zhenfeng did not specify that the lyrics be sung, and it is possible that his intention was more that people who played and listened should read or have read the lyrics, and in this way elevate their appreciation.
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19. Translation
Special terms included in the text include:

There are more
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